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Rape in Bangladesh by Pakistan Army: Deba & Daughters.
Author: Shagor Hossain
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(Added on Feb 11, 2009)
(This month 26560 readers) (Total 45996 readers) |
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It is said that Bengali are the most eye-catching ladies of Asia. Pakistan army captured the beautiful Bengali wife & teen age daughters of Feda kamal in Dhaka with the charge of spying against the Pakistan army in 1971 when the people of Bangladesh was fighting the Pakistan army for liberation. Mother & daughters were tortured, humiliated and raped again and again till the Pakistan army surrendered to the Bengali freedom fighting forces in 16th Dec, 1971. Story is based on true incident with some flavour added to give it a taste of story. |
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| Reviewer:
carlo
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Feb 17, 2009 |
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Very good and realistic story.
I would to read a history as this but with different protagonists: adolescent boy and her beautiful mother:
Synopsis: A Bengali boy (16 y. o), he is forced to assist to questioning his own mother (40 y. o.). Rape & torture of the brutal Pakistani Army during liberation war of Bangladesh in 1971. The boy tells his the tragic story with pain and shame………….
Brutalizing a mother in front of her son and torturing a man in front of his wife were favourites ways of trying to make the women talk. The entire affective family world, constructed over the years with very difficulty collapses. This is a special technique of torture within the title of psychological torture, it is named ‘family torture’.
In much in torture centers and in police stations, of South America, Asia and Medioriente, women of 35 - 50 years old were questioned in presence of their adolescent sons. This very perverse interrogation method was a method often used when the women were attractive and her son a adolescent boy.
First because, the jailers are perverse and sadistic people,
Second because this interrogation method it is very effective, a terrible psychological torture: for every mother, the fact of being naked in front of a his son and suffer to sexual tortures is a terrible shock; besides every mother knows, how much this experience to be traumatizing for the weak sexual equilibrium of adolescent boy.
Silvia Martinez Basso a woman journalist and member of important association of human rights wrote this about the technical of mother-son interrogatory: <<In this perverse form of questioning the woman is submitted to tortures more psychological than physics. In particularly it is employed a method of psychological torture named “small talk in distress”.....The woman is put in front to her own son, if not already naked yet, the woman is forced to strip to assume obscene and embarrassing positions; while talking to her, the interrogator puts her in distress: verbally abused she, fondling her breasts and her vagina. She is questioning in this manner about one hours, after to give her a deeper emotional shock, she is bound in a very uncomfortable manner and she is submitted to a slow and minute cavità search (vaginal and anal), gyno exams, enemas and other forms of psychological tortures and humiliations>>. Continues Silvia Martinez Basso: <<The psychological tortures was not the only form of tortures to which to woman is submitted in presence of her adolescent son. In many cases to the psychological torture it followed that physics torture: breast tortures (breast press and breast hangings), electric shock low voltage for nipples and vagina, wooden pony, caning, bastinado (caning on feet shoes), insertions of toys in vagina and anus (dildo, pump dildo, vibrator), little branding with cigarettes (breast, vagina and soles). These physics tortures are painful but they don't provoke in the woman you damn permanent damn, because it are type to low intensity. In the cases of “family torture” the psychological torture is more effective than that physics torture>>.
B. Shaw a psychologist, e took care of a lot of victims of cases of family-torture, He says this: << The boy was forced to assist to the questioning of his own mother, while a warder slowly masturbated he. The boys try a strong sense of shame and anguish however happened, this is the more horrible and embarrassing aspect of this terrible experience.
Erection and ejaculation, it are common physiological reactions that escape the control of every adolescent boy especially in dramatic situations as that just described. This happens because in age of puberty the organism of every adolescent boy is submitted to strong sexual hormonal secretion, and therefore it is very sensitive to every form of sexual stimulus; moreover the torture team, creates in the victim boy a relationship among sexual stimulus and cessation of mother pain: the various forms of torture physics to which the woman is submitted are interrupted when the boy ejaculates>>…..
Real protagonists.
The son, he is adolescent boy, 16 years old
The mother she is a women of 40 years old. you can describe a real women and mother: physical aspect, age, habits, job, as she is dressed normally, in this way the story is more realistic.
The woman is dressed as the classic mother. She doesn't wears erotic underwear or latex, it isn't realistic. She wears normal clothes: skirt and blouse; simple underwear: bras, brief, pantyhose. She hasn't tattoo or piercing. She is a honest woman, mother and wife, and it feels very pain and shame when she is submitted to humiliations and tortures.
Realistic emotions.
The mother: Fear, pain, embarassament, because she is interrogate in front her son.
The son: Fear and horror , he see his mother under torture and he can not react, because is tied up a chair and gagged. Embarassament, for his physiological reactions……..
Best regards and thanks for your story.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2009)
- Well, well... Out of the 23 reviews you have made so far, this is the first that is different. All the others are the same enormously lengthy cut 'n' paste job.
Okay, so I have not written this story, Carlito, but I take it upon me to advise you to upload your stories to the site, instead of adding them in the form of a review.
Because, they are not reviews. You just add a whole lot of voodoo bullshit about what you would have written, and it's always the same: a lot of bla-bla about your obsession with incest between a mother and her son.
Well, carlito, it doesn't matter what you would have done, as it's not your story, ragazzo.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
sadistico
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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Der Anfang deiner Geschichte ist nicht schlecht. JimmyJump hat teilweise recht mit seiner Behauptung, deine Storie käme einem Polizeibericht nahe.
Ich freue mich schon auf die nächsten Kapitel.
Gerne werde ich meine Bewertung höher auslegen, wenn deine Story auch die Inhalte bietet, die in den Story-Codes enthalten sind.
Ich würde mich freuen, wenn die Frau und ihre zwei Töchter grausam gefoltert und oft vergewaltigt werden.
Aber lass sie bitte NICHT sterben.
Grüße
sadistico
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The beginning of your history is not bad. JimmyJump has in part right with his contention, your story would come to a police report close.
I look forward already to the next chapters.
With pleasure I will lay out my evaluation more highly if your story offers also the contents which are contained in the story-codes.
I would be pleased if the woman and their two daughters are tormented cruelly and often raped.
But do not make her die.
Greetings
sadistico (7/10)
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- Replied by:
shagor
(Edit) (Feb 13, 2009)
- Dear Sir,
You have written the review in a language which I can not understand. Please write in English.
I think you have written in German Language. I can read and write in English and my mother tongue Bangla.
Please write to my email: shagor6@gmail.com.
Regards with the hope to get a review in English.
Shagor
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| Reviewer:
wolfj
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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Story has a realistic background which makes is more enjoyable. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
shagor
(Edit) (Feb 13, 2009)
- Dear Sir,
Thanks for your comment on my writing " Rape in Bangladesh by Pakistani Army".
Please continue reading the series and let me know your ipinion as before.
Please write to me to my email ID: shagor6@gmail.com
Regards
Shagor
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 12, 2009 |
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The content of the account was OK, bar the far too many spelling mistakes and grammatical and syntax errors.
But what really bothers me, is the fact that it is an account. Not a real story.
The descriptions read like they were plucked from a police report, or from a journalist's notes. There's no warmth in the text, nothing that makes you feel for the characters. Nothing to make you go sit on the edge of your seat in tension.
Sure, there's moments of amazement and shock. But they're the same veinof emotions one has when reading a newspaper article about some Emir who held his servants captive for weeks at the Brussels Hilton.
Now don't let yourself be put off by the low rating and rather negative review, Hossain. Because I think that you have room to improve yourself and that your writings will get better along the way.
JJ (6/10)
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- Replied by:
shagor
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2009)
- Thank you jimmy for the trouble you have taken to review my story. Indeed, I am a new writer, Sorry for the mistakes as it is likely that, I wanted to finish the writing fast.
Regarding the warmth of the story, I am sorry that, it became like a police report. In did my aim was to narrate a true event with some spices to give it a story shape.
Any way, I will surely try to improve and over come my lacking.
Please keep in touch and help me to improve as you have doen today.
Pls write to my email: shagro6@gmail.com
regards
Shagor
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2009)
- Dear Mr. Hossain, I think that, what you should have done, is take some elements out of the true story and weave an erotic content around it.
Or at least, you should have added some invented stuff from your own imagination, or both.
Now, you have posted some sort of transcript of real events, but the transcript doesn't have a life, no warmth.
You can add life through adapting the tale to your own wishes and intersperce the story with made-up content.
JJ
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