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Holly's Home Invasion
Author: Andromeda
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(Added on Jan 28, 2002)
(This month 192111 readers) (Total 324999 readers) |
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Holly and her 22 year old daughter Beth find themselves captured by home invaders and taken into slavery. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Balbars
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Aug 19, 2006 |
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Very good story, why you quit writting? (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Backstabber
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Apr 19, 2005 |
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Andromeda,
That was a great story. I liked the images the story created. You have a very good writing talent and I hope to read similar stories and some completion on this one. Thanks for the great story. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Jul 15, 2004 |
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Very good story. Unfortunately, it seems to have ended in an unfinished state. (9/10)
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MDOFlahertyII
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Dec 29, 2003 |
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I am looking forward to more chapters of this story or other works from this writer (10/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 5, 2003 |
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'nough said (9/10)
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smiley010
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Sep 2, 2003 |
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A really good story. Why did you stop. (9/10)
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tttttt
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Aug 20, 2003 |
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silly.........no sense in it (5/10)
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darrenkinky
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May 10, 2002 |
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Good story, really enjoyed it and so did my sub. looking forward to more. (10/10)
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bigone
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Apr 29, 2002 |
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Good story, and I look forward to more installments. Could be more varied in the torments. For example, why should the women selected for wasting simply be shot? They could be tortured and maimed over time, for the entertainment of guests at the form or for snuff movies. (9/10)
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thayet
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Apr 28, 2002 |
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Wonderful story. Description of the mother's emotions changing from fear to disgust to acceptance and finally enjoyment particularly well done. Next chapter eagerly awaited. (9/10)
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jilli
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Apr 11, 2002 |
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This is a great story. I like the variation in characters. Nice background on the slavers. A little more background on the women might be nice. But all around a very enjoyable read. Very nicely done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Llabmik
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Mar 3, 2002 |
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A very well-written story! I like the detail. I like the cast of characters. Those of us that write stories can definitely learn from this one. (10/10)
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brant223
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Feb 24, 2002 |
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Well written. Very descriptive as i can "see" the victims on that table. (8/10)
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mikey
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Feb 11, 2002 |
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Great story, I like the rape on the table. I enjoy the fear in the victims. I just hate to wait for each chapter.
(8/10)
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