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Roses are Red
Author: Darling Surrender
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(Added on Feb 11, 2009)
(This month 9056 readers) (Total 16053 readers) |
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A young girl is forced into submission by her closest friend |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Tease Cathy
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Feb 24, 2009 |
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This needs a sequel. Or just plain more work from you. I love it. I like how there isn't a lot of character developement, but these are people we all know, so you can't really evolve them anyways. The only thing I'd change if i were doing this is to go over it a few more times. I THINK but I'm not sure, that I found a spelling issue or two. I really liked it.
I think the biggest reason why it seems like most didn't care for it would be that the actual amount of sex was so light it can hardly be counted.
Keep Writing!
~Cathy (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Saeva
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Feb 12, 2009 |
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The first part is so short you barely get anything and what is there is flat. (4/10)
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