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Teacher Doesn’t Live Here Anymore
Author: Pirates Wench
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
(This month 13455 readers) (Total 29033 readers) |
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Schoolgirl goes to teacher’s house prepared to “do anything for a better grade” but gets the wrong house. She gets what she’s asking for and more, except for the improved grade. |
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| Reviewer:
grinner666
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Trite ending; the rapist is an obvious moron who, if the dumb bimbo he rapes didn't miraculously discover she's a pain slut, would've been doing 20 to life about an hour after letting her go. And the author really, REALLY needs to learn to spell. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 4, 2009)
- Trite ending? I thought the ending to be a very nice twist. And about the rapist being an obvious moron, hey, aren't they all, in real life?
Besides, this is a fantasy, so the word moron could also be applied to those who are a tad eager to take the tale for something that is real.
You also seem to have but a faint idea about the technicalities and timeline of an arrest, lawsuit and the eventual sentence. It takes more than an hour to go about those things.
JJ
- Replied by:
grinner666
(Edit) (Feb 6, 2009)
- Then I would like to suggest two things. First, that there is a HUGE difference between taking a fantasy for real and an unwillingness to suspend disbelief when such suspension becomes ludicrous, even comical. Second, if you cannot understand the concepts of hyperbole and sarcasm then you have no business reviewing anything, or even reading material for adults.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 13, 2009)
- A bit ironic that in your little rant you do aknowledge the fact that it is you yourself that is unwilling to go along with a certain suspension of disbelief, because it doesn't fit in your narrow view of which beliefs can and cannot be suspended.
Furthermore, I fail to see the connection between my eventual ignorance of your subliminal hyperbolic sarcasm and my ability or, indeed, business, of reviewing 'adult' material.
But it's a good thing that such decisions aren't made by the likes of people like you, grinnie.
Now, do yourself, and all of us, a favour and learn to read. Read, as in taking an effort to comprehend what's in the words.
JJ
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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Cute little story. A bit over the top, but it works.
Tho I would have liked the man to be a tad more sophisticated instead of being so crude.
Good job, Wench.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
PiratesWench
(Edit) (Feb 5, 2009)
- Thank you so much for backing me up :). Constructive criticism is one thing but just being nasty is another. Thanks again and I’m glad you liked my story! It’s my first completed one.
- Replied by:
PiratesWench
(Edit) (Feb 5, 2009)
- Thanks for reviewing my story!
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