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I Am Your Meat
Author: Nialla
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
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Sarah discovers her deep hidden desire to become meat, and decides to explore it ! |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Omega22
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Dec 4, 2010 |
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I liked that, but you forgot to use skewers that you have mentioned in the beginning. (9/10)
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Escritor
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Feb 9, 2009 |
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I'll try and be as fair as possible, since this is not my kind of thing at all... but it's very nicely written, and I commend you for that. Hope you would write like this on less extreme and unusual things so I would enjoy them even more :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Feb 7, 2009 |
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A fair start; seems as though it might fit in the Dolcett universe, at the very beginnings of that supposed reality. The story could use some help grammatically, as you use too many sentences punctuated with (...), which sometimes indicates incomplete thoughts. There likely should be more paragraph breaks as well.
If there is more, I'd surely like to see it, and you have created a viable character there to take it forward. (7/10)
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Polecat
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Feb 7, 2009 |
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Great start. I hope there is more.
Much more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
WyldWyl
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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Wonderful to see you posting again- great work as always, descriptive, emotionally intense, well-written and exploratory. Fantastic stuff. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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Hey Nialla, glad to have you back!
And with a bang too. Delighted to see you in such good form.
Am still facinated by your little errands to that place where the ocean falls off the Earth and dreams and day collide...
Take care.
JJ (10/10)
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