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Milky
Author: Surtea
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
(This month 137211 readers) (Total 205178 readers) |
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A pretty American woman gets transferred to the Tokyo office. There she finds some of the customs very different. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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nassim
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May 4, 2011 |
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Loved this, thought the ending was an improvement on the original story. Surprised neither yourself or Shabbadew2002 took the characters to a pink salon.... (10/10)
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doctavian
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Mar 20, 2011 |
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A well written story. It's strengths lie in the fact that the author can produce not only an erotic story, but also an interesting one. Well done. Well done indeed,
Doctavian (10/10)
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Curtis
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Apr 7, 2010 |
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I'm glad you finally continued this. Hopefully the next installment will follow more rapidly (since you left us with a cliff-hanger).
EDIT: Not the ending I was looking for, but relatively satisfying and up to the level of the rest of the story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Surtea
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2010)
- Done and dusted.... I have posted the last episode. I hope you enjoy it!
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huffward
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Feb 27, 2010 |
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Bukakke is not my thing at all, but as a tale of corporate bullying this story works well. Even the rather thin characterisations work in the context as the bullies are, after all, remote grey suits. As has been noted below, the female plant is a strong idea, but perhaps there should have been more conflict between her and the main character. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Surtea
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2010)
- Thank you. I am not entirely sure that bukkake is my thing either. However, 'damsels in distress' and humiliation are what turns me on. So bukkake seemed an interesting theme to work around in my first attempt to write for public consumption.
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Chuckdom19
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Mar 6, 2009 |
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A fine tale of the genre; humiliation could increase a bit, I think. Pretty well written though, and am interested to see more. (8/10)
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Allan_D
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Feb 15, 2009 |
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Excellent story with lots of possibilities for broadening out to involve the other subsidiary characters as well as a deepening of the degradation. I particularly like the collusion by the other female characters in the humiliation of the central character. Lots more soon please! (9/10)
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rhmusic
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Feb 14, 2009 |
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One of my absolute favorites! Love the setup, love how it's progressing. Her being a fish-out-of-water in a strange land, works great. Especially love her roommate taking over her life. Yum. (10/10)
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RhondaLee
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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A few grammatical error, like "Here" vs. "Hear"
Other than that, very creative (9/10)
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grinner666
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Feb 10, 2009 |
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Nice start; can't wait to see how deep her degradation goes. (8/10)
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JC_Storm
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Feb 7, 2009 |
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I like the setting and the sexual situations she is in, I would like to have more description of her and her feeling but I am enjoying it tremendously (9/10)
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janmayen
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Feb 6, 2009 |
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Very sexy! I am looking forward to the heroine being pierced and rented out :-)
Great job Surtea (9/10)
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kemosabe
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Feb 5, 2009 |
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Reminds me a bit of "Whore 94" that is in this collection of stories somewhere. I sense that there is a lot that can be developed with this plot and I'm looking forward eagerly to more chapters. (9/10)
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jkim
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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gyrl also likes the start, and will surely keep reading. gyrl hopes that the action begins to include some bondage. the humiliation thus far is very exquisite. keep it up! (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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Excellent start to what seems to be a promising story. I've read quite a few af these "U.S. woman sent to Japan company" tales, and "Milky" is right up there with the best.
I also feel that Surtea doesn't seem quite settled in her writing, judging by some rather abrupt changes in mood, or not following-up on some happenings (like the groping in the subway that's stopped being mentioned), but the skill is obviously there, so I'm confident that Surtea will only get better as time (and this story) progresses.
Very well done, Surtea.
JJ (9/10)
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