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A Perfect Life
Author: Onewhoadores
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(Added on Jan 28, 2009)
(This month 69836 readers) (Total 98929 readers) |
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An exploration into the evolution of the longterm D/s, femdom relationships of two couples. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Jun 19, 2012 |
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Excellent story that was as touching as it was erotic. Extremely well written and just a pure joy to read. (10/10)
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xSoCalCynicx
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Jan 22, 2011 |
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A worthy sequel to a great original story - this writer has talent! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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In my review of "A Perfect Match" i stated that, that story was so perfect it did not need a continuation - i was proved wrong. Often i have found sequals are not as good as the original story, but not so in this case. i particularly like the twist at the end of chapter 7 and beginning of chapter 8, a nice little mindfuck (and i fell for it).
As i stated in my review of the first story i totally relate to Jeremy. And it is for this reason i often find F/m stories not to my taste in that the Domme invariably uses a lot of pain and nearly always just for pains sake. For this reason i usually read F/f stories because of their generally gentler story line, so it is a real pleasent change to find an F/m story where the plot is more about power exchange than pain (i do agree that sometimes pain is required but purely as a punishment).
Please keep your excellent stories coming. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
onewhoadores
(Edit) (Apr 29, 2010)
- DH,
Thank you so very much for your kind and gracious thoughts and reviews of my stories. It is extremely gratifying to me that readers such as yourself enjoy and can even be touched by them, and I greatly appreciate that you, and others, have taken the time to let me know this. Please feel free to contact me, if you ever so desire, about any of them.
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mgalpern
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Mar 20, 2009 |
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sensitive and sexy..the ultimate accolade for fiction...makes one believe its true (10/10)
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Lisa Jones
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Feb 18, 2009 |
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I was a big fan of 'A Perfect Match' and I'm delighted that 'A Perfect Life' continues the story. Once again the author has gone deep into the emotions and motives that lie beneath a D/s relationship. This is a 'real' story about 'real' people. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
onewhoadores
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2009)
- Lisa,
Coming from a writer of your quality and talent,such a review and rating is beyond measure. I truly appreciate it.
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| Reviewer:
chuck
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Feb 13, 2009 |
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============original review 2 Feb 09===========
The quality of writing, the plot, and the characters gives this story an firm 8. Unfortunately, the story doesn't stand alone. It requires the initial story to impart any emotional impact and the 'story' is written more as a summary than a story. I may revise my rating if there are more parts to the story and they tell the story and don't just describe it.
========= edit 13 Feb 09 ===============
The second part brings back some of the flavor of the original work as the story unfolds. I think it deserves moving the 8 to a 9. I'm hoping for something creative and new while still maintaining the flavor of the relationship.
The wedding was similar to one I envisioned using myself (if I ever resume writing additions to my story) where there is more to the ceremony than the obvious 'vanilla' ritual. I like the concept of a D/s relationship where there is mutual respect but still retains the erotic tension of submission and dominance. I will be looking forward to watching this story progress. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
onewhoadores
(Edit) (Feb 2, 2009)
- Chuck, I appreciate your comments and review of both of my stories. This sequel will have ten parts, and I do highly recommend that the original be read first to better understand the characters and action in this one. Still, for clarity, I did feel that I had to recapsulize at least some of the aspects of the original, particularly in the first few parts of the current one. I truly hope that there will be enough original thought and action in the coming parts to entertain and satisfy. While I do greatly appreciate and desire comments and reviews, I would ask that they do let this story progress some first. Thank you.
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