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Toilet Trained
Author: Ted E. Bear
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(Added on Jan 23, 2002)
(This month 89247 readers) (Total 125194 readers) |
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Poor college girl looking to make big money on the weekends, answers an ad that leads to her abuse and ultimate slavery. After giving her a mickey, which knocks her out cold, she is stripped, bound placed inbetween 2 walls in a self-contained room with monitors. 2 large dildos are forced into her ass and cunt, a clital stimulator is attached to her clit, a waste pipe from a toilet, on the other side of the wall is forced deep into her mouth and she is tied up in such a way that she can't get it out. Her nipples are clipped to a board that moves away from her whenever someone on the other side flushes the toilet, thus making the clips bite into her nipples harder and yank them away from her body. Later she is auctioned off to the highest bidder. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Juventino
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Jun 1, 2010 |
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Just wasn't very good, the course of events wasn't really exciting and it wasn't really a story, it felt like you was writing a report (5/10)
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bluebeard
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Short but extreme fantasy (8/10)
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BigCat
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Wow! That is really wild. (7/10)
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jbowler65
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Enjoyable story that seemed to end too soon. (7/10)
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hyphen666
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Jan 24, 2002 |
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Fire-Bird, the author of To Obey, has already pioneered this type of paint by the numbers story. I am not a great fan of this type of visual aided writing. Take it for what it is, one man's opinion. (5/10)
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zkay
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pleasant read, but felt it finished too soon (6/10)
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