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Apple For Teacher
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Jan 23, 2002)
(This month 18317 readers) (Total 52233 readers) |
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Two boys stumble upon the violent attack on their beloved parochial school teacher. Horror turns to something else as they watch the brutal gang rape. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
MasterJoshua
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Jan 6, 2007 |
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Needs work in the plot, but easily an enjoyable story. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
D. Atrocity
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May 26, 2004 |
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Lovely. Short, bittersweet, and to the point. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Excellent writing, although a bit bare on the details. (8/10)
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Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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everything you write is outstanding (9/10)
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Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Feb 8, 2004 |
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Short and sweet. It could use a few more details though. (7/10)
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Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Jul 3, 2003 |
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Phew! Very believable too. (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Beethovenfan
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Jul 8, 2002 |
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Concisely written in a style suited to short stories. I felt it lacked colour and fell short in its portrayal of the teenage boy's dilemma during the rape and after. (5/10)
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Reviewer:
RubbrSpatula
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Feb 23, 2002 |
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Easily Kallie's best work on the site. Mesmirising in detail and great empathy with the teacher and the boys. Believable. (9/10)
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easysue
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Jan 27, 2002 |
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Wow as one girl to another that was great we both are very oral and anal. We normaly do not like rape but that was hot do you have any others. Sue and Wendy (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Pillager
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Jan 26, 2002 |
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Wow, was under the impression the author was female, but this one makes me wonder. If you are a woman, you've got a great handle on the male psyche. This was a great little story--not complicated, but very real feeling. And yes, great action. Good work! (10/10)
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Reviewer:
hyphen666
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Jan 24, 2002 |
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A simple plot, but hidden in the violence and degradation are a few kernels of truth that raise this extremely well written tale out of the muck. (9/10)
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