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A Darker Universe
Author: Mermaid Master
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(Added on Dec 13, 2008)
(This month 61408 readers) (Total 89530 readers) |
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A high school girl is introduced to a program where she is required to be naked for a week in school and given to a boy to be his slave. The program proves overwhelmingly successful. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Sep 22, 2012 |
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As hart_mut4711 points out Jen's dad seems tpo change names a few times and there there are other occasions when charaters seem to get muddled up. In all a good yarn, but i have to admit i would hate to live in the "Darker Universe" ........ how would i serve Mistress in such an alternate universe? (8/10)
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Riptide
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Oct 10, 2011 |
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Great story. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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great story great concept (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Dec 18, 2008 |
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A truly wonderful tale, well-told and literate. I would request the authors to extend and expand, or perhaps to follow other characters through the program? Bravo! (10/10)
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hart_mut4711
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Dec 16, 2008 |
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Long Gor-inspired story in modern times with main focus on spanking. Generally well written, but Jennifer's father changed his name too often...
I appreciated your work very much. (9/10)
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