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Asians For Auction
Author: J. Kim
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(Added on Dec 12, 2008)
(This month 111717 readers) (Total 194314 readers) |
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Two college coeds volunteer for a charity auction. They are in for a suprise! |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Mar 7, 2009 |
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Awkward start which could have done minus a lot of the superfluous details.
The body of the story is an excellent read, though there's a lot of silly references to stuff which, according to the writer, is typical Asian behaviour, but is in fact just human behaviour.
Very enjoyable story.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
calasiangirl
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Mar 1, 2009 |
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I love the idea and how the story has progressed so far. Looking forward to reading more stories by you in the future. (9/10)
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johnlw77
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Feb 20, 2009 |
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brilliant. There is nothing better than a well-told story of the descent of innocents into slavery! (10/10)
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wilobersm
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Feb 16, 2009 |
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A very enjoyable story with lot of suspense of what will happen in future! (10/10)
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kencyr
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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Really enjoyed it. Nice idea and good build up.
(9/10)
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slut2002gyrl
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Feb 1, 2009 |
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hot, so hot, volcanic. love the pace, but something is wrong. parts 7, 8 are missing. please fix this! (10/10)
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Falcon
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Jan 7, 2009 |
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A promising start. May adjust rating when there is more to go on. A major challenge for author will be how to carry through on the pretense that this is only a 'change of venue' without anyone becoming suspicious and backing out. Keep it coming! (8/10)
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steph2004ster
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Jan 1, 2009 |
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i can feel the story developing into a hot and delcious tale (10/10)
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Liberated
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Dec 21, 2008 |
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It was a good start to a story. With more chapters it may be a good story. (7/10)
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Deathnote
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Dec 16, 2008 |
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Pretty good start. Hope to read more from you. ^_^ (9/10)
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