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first oral experience forced
Author: laila.
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(Added on Nov 19, 2008)
(This month 9624 readers) (Total 17673 readers) |
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a young arab girl is forced to do oral for the 1st time and has a rough experience |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Nov 22, 2008 |
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Very good descriptive detail of forced blow job from the girl's point of view. There are problems with poor capitalization, multiple sentences just strung together separated by commas, and excessive and uneven line spacing.
I would consider a higher rating if these formatting problems were fixed and there was somewhat more about the girl's character or personality before the act itself. As written it seems more like the story of every Arab female than a story about a particular girl. Humiliation stories are more fun when you feel like you know the victim. (8/10)
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