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THE END OF THE TRAIL
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Nov 19, 2008)
(This month 68546 readers) (Total 105075 readers) |
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Two women abducted on horseback and subjected to degradations in a barn |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Only thing I didn't agree with in "The End Of The Trail" was the Ford truck. Having Aries as starsign, I prefer Dodge Ram trucks. Or better, their Nitro series, like the Detonator, though I must admit that the Ford F350 Heavy Duty is in a class of its own. Still, the Dodgies carry that Ram logo, which has me wanting to sprout horns and go head to head with the lot.
"The End Of The Trail" has that familiar J Lewis style, which is a bit like a spun-out drone, but one that isn't boring or getting on yer nerves.
On the contrary, J manages to cram lots of info in those in-between commas outbursts, without letting the reader lose what's going on.
I also come to like J Lewis more and more. At least, the part that shines through in his stories or added preludes. Because he is someone who is bave enough to change his mind and letting us know he did.
Doing my name proud I keep on jumping through his stories at a bit of a random order, which makes that I but now find out that J already stopped writing once before. Seems it happens every ten stories.
But I'm afraid that once you start writing --especially as good as J Lewis does-- it's getting harder and harder to not continue. A bit like some sort of addiction. Maybe the poor lad is having a cold turkey right at this very moment, feverishley searching the apartment for a leftover pen and a blank sheet of paper...
Like I said before, I'm glad that J Lewis continued putting some of his thoughts to paper.
After "XXX", it seems like he *really* quit. We'll see. If not, hey, welcome back. If yes, well, like I also said before, the ride was a pleasant one. Even if it wasn't in a Dodge...
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ossa
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Feb 16, 2009 |
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Excellent writing especially the descriptive passages. Hope to see more. (10/10)
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BDMjane
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Nov 26, 2008 |
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Please continue writing, Sir. You are in my top three favourite writers. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey_Slayer
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Nov 24, 2008 |
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Very good writing and excellent story. A vicious master who knows how to put his girls in delicious predicaments. Please continue. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chalsia
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Nov 23, 2008 |
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i do hope you will continue the story, because i want to know more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 21, 2008 |
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great start can't wait for more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Nov 21, 2008 |
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Very good start. (9/10)
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