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Be careful of what you wish for... Author: Ricardo
(Added on Nov 18, 2008) (This month 9911 readers) (Total 18638 readers)
Straight couple take the plunge into domination and bondage

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Reviewer: masterdw (Edit) Rating: Nov 19, 2008
I assume there will be more to come. This chapter really is too short to warrant a review . I could have rated it a 3 just as easily, because there is not enough content. Next time don'y rush to submit until you have dotten to at least 1 "good part". (6/10)

Reviewer: lucy (Edit) Rating: Nov 19, 2008
good idea and a devious ending, hihihi.
some more work on grammar and spelling wouldn't hurt, though.
And maybe also some more elaboration on the wording. Starting every other sentence with "I" gets boring with time.
And last but not least: if you don't intend to write a second part the storycodes are quite misleading. (5/10)

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