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Female Supremacist Family
Author: slave2MsJuana
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(Added on Nov 8, 2008)
(This month 89128 readers) (Total 120621 readers) |
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Born into a family practicing Female Supremacy and raised to be my Sister's property. Locked into a chastity device upon hitting puberty and never granted release, i become a complete slave. Read about my training and service to Females. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
abitbent
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Nov 20, 2008 |
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The imagination of the writer is certainly vivid however I/i C/couldn't G/get P/past A/all the typical lower case capitalized nonsense. (4/10)
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carwyn99
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Nov 19, 2008 |
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Maybe in the next one you could get your mum and sister to use cigarette torture on you.
Stubbing them out on you over and over again (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Nov 16, 2008 |
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The concept of the story is excellent but overall the one paragraph could have been divided into several. (5/10)
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mastah007
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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The concept itself is sexy, but a lot could be improved. To be blunt it is badly written, in terms of grammar as well as structure and (in my subjective opinion) also in terms of the content. The main thing I would improve apart from the fundamental quality of the writing is giving the characters some feeling and real development and let things progress a bit slower. It's much sexier if things get gradually worse and if his sisters actually care for him even when they torture him and if he resists but eventually has to submit. (5/10)
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dbenne2002
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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Look forward to reading future chapters. good story line. Hope to hear more details in the seduction of others. (7/10)
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pet2pleazu
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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Written with lots of imagination, but not much experience..Grammer mistakes (4/10)
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boytoyx3mmmm
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Nov 11, 2008 |
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This story touched a dark place in me that I did not know was there! (7/10)
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Bjam02
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Nov 10, 2008 |
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Content was good. Good star, cant wait to read more. (7/10)
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carl1505
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Nov 10, 2008 |
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I loved the content but hope that's just the start (9/10)
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