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Sunder
Author: Unknown
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(Added on Jan 16, 2002)
(This month 121497 readers) (Total 195875 readers) |
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This is a very long, dark tale that bounces around between many characters. There are 3 heirs to a major privately held corporation, for which their father split into 3 divisions, one for each child, but allowing for 1 of them to end up in control of the entire company. All three are very dominant and have many sexual perversions. You don't want to get on the bad side, as death would be preferable to what they will do to you. They act as if they are above the law as well as above anyone questioning their actions. All three are very dominant both in their public & private lives. All engage in sex with their employees as well as those unfortunate to be captured by this hauty trio. Very erotic and sadistic. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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Read this story a couple of years ago on another site. Didn't know it was posted here as well. Excellent tale of powergames and sexual corruption.
JJ (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Nov 14, 2006 |
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Great, classic work - better than most novels you'll be forced to read in a liberal arts course. Having said that, it didn't quite reach a 'ten' for me because parts of it had me hitting the 'skip down' button, and some of the 'fat' could have been trimmed from it. If the author of this story ever turns up, PLEASE get in touch with me! I'd love to collaborate! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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absolutely amazing, and what i real like about your work in genenral is you do all aspect, not just Maledom, you work around all the gnenre which makes reading your story great because everything is very different and good as well, outstanding job on this (10/10)
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balorlv
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Aug 12, 2005 |
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This is a well known story that has been around on the Internet since the early BBS days. I can't rem. where I first read it some 15 years ago. As far as I know the author never finshed the story. (9/10)
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teamster
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May 25, 2005 |
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Even though I found some aspects of the story personally repellant I have to respect the skill and imagination of the writer. There's a lot more real torture than sex here and for me that becomes rather more depressing than arousing. But I did like the characters and the overall plotting of the piece. Obviously the writer put a good deal of time and effort into this work. I can certainly identify with his frustration at the lack of feedback which he expresses in the notes between chapters. It's hard to keep motivated when you see that tens of thousands of people are reading your work and only four or five of them will go to the trouble to review it or comment on it. (10/10)
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Macuss
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Sep 9, 2004 |
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Loved it!...i think most of the other reviews say everything i would add here except i would of gave it a better rating if it was finished. i would rate the in the top three of the best stories i ever read on here. Please come back and finish it! (7/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 15, 2004 |
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gripping and well written story i would love to see the whole thing. the character's were some of the most developed i have ever read in erotica liturature. very well done!! (10/10)
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whpike
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Mar 1, 2004 |
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I note that the posting date was back in January of 2002. I just wonder if anyone has the compleat thing. it's a well written story with great character development as well as a devious story line, I'd love to see the thing in it's compleat form. (10/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Dec 6, 2002 |
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Well, it took me four days, but I finally got it all read. Whew! Let me just say, I don't think I have ever seen anyone go into this much depth and description yet. I really liked how the characters were developed, although one or two were pretty damned ruthless. I would highly recommend this story to anyone with several days to kill reading a really great story. Could probably be published. (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 11, 2002 |
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This well-known story has passages that are as gripping and well-written as anything I've read in this genre. Unfortunately is also has some passages that I find too extreme (although I commend the author's repeated warnings to that effect) and too implausible. (8/10)
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Req_Pro
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May 23, 2002 |
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Awesome, this story is the epidomy of that word for I am in awe. I admit it was a slow start but an amazing payoff. I would put it in the catagory of the most intense BDSM novels I have read, for it definatly strikes a cord in my soul. 10 (10/10)
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mps928
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Jan 18, 2002 |
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This was a GREAT story. It combined all the ellaments of a good BDSM novella. It took a while to start and make sense, but afterwards it was well worth the wait. I highly recomend it for anyone and everyone. (10/10)
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