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The Long Wait
Author: Klooe TV
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(Added on Oct 28, 2008)
(This month 50300 readers) (Total 55348 readers) |
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A submissive awaits their Master in a hotel room. a prospective new master asked me to write a scenario. Its my first attempt and I know grammatically it is not great. As a real time sub though I thought I would share my writing |
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| Reviewer:
sirbor
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Oct 30, 2008 |
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I liked the story, and I would like to read more. I hope you continue writing and expand on this theme. (9/10)
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