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Trucking Nightmare
Author: Diamondcat
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(Added on Oct 12, 2008)
(This month 9944 readers) (Total 21007 readers) |
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Captured and bound in the back of a semi. He seduces her mind as He takes what He wants from her body. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Oct 23, 2008 |
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The story is ok, if very, very common in many ways: it has been retold so much that you need some major change of pace in the next chapter to make it different from the others. Something fresh and new will raise your scored. It's pretty well written, just too common a theme.
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
DesertDom
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Oct 18, 2008 |
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Nice story, could get interesting as the truck driver looses control and really lets his kinks go. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lucy
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Oct 17, 2008 |
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Nice story and good flow too. Characters could be elaborated a little bit more. Some minor mistakes i noticed, like: how can he see her tears falling when she's blindfolded?
But all in all good reading, even when it's not exactly my piece of cake. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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It is a great story. I will up it after a good chapter two. Your truck driver is a man after my heart. You will need back story at some point. Keep up the good work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
diamondcat
(Edit) (Oct 25, 2008)
- Thanks - I wrote the story based in part, on true characters. I hadn't planned on posting it at all hence the sketchy background. I was married to the man in the story and was working through some real fears...lol I appreciate the encouragement.
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