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Soiled Goods
Author: velvetglove
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(Added on Oct 12, 2008)
(This month 55241 readers) (Total 67956 readers) |
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Kitchens can be dangerous places. The Cereal Intruder from 'Used Goods' strikes again. |
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Average (?): (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 4, 2012 |
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Nice story, expertly written, with some larger than life characterizations which make everything the more realistic, even when going over the top. Excellent! JJ (10/10)
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Reviewer:
Escritor
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Dec 3, 2008 |
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Very good sequel. The main character is developed further, and the whole story revolves around him, not the victim, as in the first part. I will have to read Damaged Goos now! :) (8/10)
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Reviewer:
lucy
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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The main character is even more authenthic and crafted out than in the first story. I also liked the ending. Very good reading. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2008)
- Thanks Lucy, for your rating. My blog contains news on my writing; http://velvetramblings.blogspot.com
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Reviewer:
rubyred88
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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great story! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Oct 16, 2008)
- Hi Ruby, thanks for your review and rating. The next story in the series is in the pipeline waiting for the news stories update. It's called "Damaged Goods".
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