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Author: ariel emms
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(Added on Oct 8, 2008)
(This month 11517 readers) (Total 25793 readers) |
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a young woman is captured and tormented, her situation growing ever worse and worse. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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grea work, great piece of writing (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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ariel's creatures move through misty decorum and probably sport cute transparant wings, while soft harp music accompanies the creaking of leather and cracks of the whip. Strange combination, at times, but it mostly works.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ariel emms
(Edit) (Jan 24, 2009)
- Jimmy, i love your reviews! you really get the feel of my stories, the atmosphere i'm hoping to create. thank you so much.
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Jan 28, 2009)
- It is I who must thank you, sweet Angel, for being who you are and writing the way you do...
JJ
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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Like previous reviewer I want more details. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Oct 11, 2008 |
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Delicious...very fairytale like quality and a great scenario. My only wish is that you'd gone into more detail, instead of glossing over so many events, but hard to complain. Great job! (10/10)
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