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The Rescue
Author: ariel emms
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(Added on Oct 8, 2008)
(This month 11264 readers) (Total 25048 readers) |
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a young woman has herself auctioned off, thinking it will be fun. she is mistaken. |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Jun 23, 2010 |
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Very clever, having worked in a multinational company, i can confirm the inter-departmental memo's are totally realistic. Also just like my experiances, all leading to one person getting themselves even more power than they already had.
Mixing all that with some form of slave business is brillant. (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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Must agree with masterdw. Too many blanks. But ariel emms' reply explained a lot. And I do like ariel's writing.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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Creative but needed more back story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
ariel emms
(Edit) (Oct 12, 2008)
- it's a reasonable observation that more back story is needed. by way of explanation, though, the main characters in my stories are me and my friends in Second Life, and these were originally written for them. these events didn't occur, but the original intended audience would know all about the personalities and relationships between those involved. that doesn't mean the back story shouldn't be there for other readers, but that's why it isn't there.
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