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Author: velvetglove
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(Added on Sep 24, 2008)
(This month 20430 readers) (Total 44658 readers) |
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A bad morning for an unsuspecting housewife. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Dec 27, 2010 |
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flawless (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 9, 2009 |
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not bad at all, easy to read & enjoyable (7/10)
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joshjg
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Dec 30, 2008 |
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not bad, more details would be nice though. make the story a bit more interesting. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Nov 30, 2008 |
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Nice. I'm not much into rape when it's not a fantasy play, but still the story made me hard. And it's very well written. I don't like so much when you jump in time, particularly twice in this story, when the narrator goes to rifle through her thing and magically 88 minutes have passed and he has the victim on his hands already. The other is when he's just starting to fuck her and suddenly he's already peeling off the condom. But I guess it's just part of your style, and I think it works well though.
I'll have to read the sequels now!! :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
CoughDrop
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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An excellent short story that skillfully establishes the twisted character of it's villain. There's a real and nasty quality to the tension as it builds. But it's all over too quickly! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Sep 30, 2008 |
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A very well-written home invasion tale. Cute twist at the end. And you said there was no humor in the story... (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jkim
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Sep 28, 2008 |
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wonderful start, but so wish it was continued (8/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Oct 5, 2008)
- I'm planning a sequel. Regards, V
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| Reviewer:
dorothystrangelove
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Sep 27, 2008 |
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This was very well written and the characters came to life vividly, this was a great read. (9/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 27, 2008 |
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Well written, but one cold-hearted bastard! (8/10)
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lits
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Sep 25, 2008 |
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Although the plot is too extreme for me i liked the story very much. The character of the perpetrator is well worked out, and the plot is very believable and realistic. (8/10)
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