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How we became slaves
Author: ayni'or
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(Added on Sep 18, 2008)
(This month 68926 readers) (Total 91795 readers) |
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Husband and wife find out that their best friends are in fact Mistress and slave. Their journey to how all three now serve their Owner |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
slaveahm
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Nov 17, 2008 |
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I really liked this story. It has a nice plot, that is definitely one of the most promising among F/mf stories I read so far. I can only hope that it will be continued... (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Escritor
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Oct 14, 2008 |
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Good introduction, would like to read the rest of the story. Several spelling and grammar errors, as well as confusing "teach" with "learn", and other things like that. Some inconsistencies as well, at one point Claire is disrobing, when moments before she was said to be naked. John is reluctant to serve Kim, but after only one line his doubts are gone, which seems very unrealistic.
But the premise is fine and the story has potential, please develop it some more in further chapters. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
bkmasta
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Sep 19, 2008 |
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the story is a very good beginning. the grammer errors could be corrected but good start. (7/10)
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