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The Emperor's Daughter
Author: Razor7826
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(Added on Sep 13, 2008)
(This month 54097 readers) (Total 89227 readers) |
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The Emperor is dead. Now his daughter must pay for the thousands of sadistic sins she committed. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chzwiz007
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Dec 5, 2011 |
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Enjoyed the story. However there were frequent editing errors. This caused me to lose my train of thought. Liked the plot and premise. An evil central character and the revenge factor make the story more realistic.
Too many of these stories have an innocent sexually punished and forced into a life of slavery. Often the writer has left holes in the story where the innocent could easily have gotten out of it. Most are also one sided the majority of the time. Continuous cruelty and severe pain. Sometimes they embellish with enemas, scat, etc.
Gets old after a few pages. Hose her off and give her a pat on the head. In "The Emperor's Daughter" the central "victim" is there for vengeance. The flash backs give an explanation of what she had done to her next tormentor. Easy to agree that she had it coming to her, no matter how brutal or degrading. There were little snips of hope and she was given a chance to clean up every few weeks.
Needs better editing, but a very good read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deathnote
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Nov 8, 2008 |
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Awesome story. I see the protagonist's character didn't really change in the end. Loved the flashbacks, btw. :p (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Nov 16, 2008)
- Thank you very much.
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| Reviewer:
Domina of Paradise
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Sep 19, 2008 |
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What an excellent story. It was full of imagination and spirit. Please continue your fine work. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Nov 16, 2008)
- Thank you for taking the time to leave a review, especially since it is the only story you've left one for thus far.
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| Reviewer:
Hawksinger
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Sep 17, 2008 |
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wow thiwas very well written. I would expect to see this in a book somewhere! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Sep 17, 2008)
- Thank you very much for your kind words, and the time spent to read and review my work.
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| Reviewer:
TheVariableX
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Sep 15, 2008 |
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Very good read.
I always like a tale where a, preferably mean spirited, dominant girl gets her cumupence. I'd like to see a bit more of the place this crumbling empire has in the world.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Sep 17, 2008)
- I've planned a sequel or spinoff, but I'm not sure if I'll ever get around to writing it.
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