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Tina Chained
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Aug 27, 2008)
(This month 66014 readers) (Total 126391 readers) |
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blackmailed into submission, and abused. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Feb 11, 2009 |
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The harshness of the whole thing is a real turn on to me, and I personally hope there is no light at the end of the tunnel for Tina.
Very engaging story and good details on the tortures.
My only complaint would be that sometimes you seem to change your mind on how you're going to do something even though it had already been said that it was going to happen differently. For instance "Tonight I'm going to pierce your nipples and clit," but then he doesn't do it that night. That and some very obvious grammatical errors keep it from being a 10 for me. The story itself though couldn't get much better. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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Read the first part, then forgot all about it. Those things just happen.
A good thing Excalibur decided to follow-up on this one, first of all to get "Tina Chained" back under our attention, and secondly, because it's a story that certainly deserves to be read.
I've got mixed feelings about the author, because, and this is strictly personal of course, his writings seem to veer from almost total shambles to the purely exquisite.
"Tina" is neither, but is most certainly much nearer to the latter. Well written with a great, well worked-out female character, it has the basic qualities a 'real-life' experience should have: great dialogue and a believable plot.
My only fear is that "Tina Chained" will wind-up in a dead-end street, because of the limited goals Harry has set for himself in the use of Tina.
But we'll have to see about that, as Excalibur could have an ace up his sleeve, still.
JJ (9/10)
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notsofast
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Feb 2, 2009 |
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With just enough back story to make it credible Excalibur paces this account nicely. It tells of a woman enslaved, immobilized and tortured by a series of techniques that, while not overly original, push many buttons.
My only reservation about their relationship is that there is little. The object of his efforts seems to be to use her to produce hardcore for his porn sites. By continual invocation of pain whether deserved or not (a night of machine fucking by double dildo without lubrication) and humiliation (Max the dog), he gives her no chance to pass from unwilling to willing slave. At least not in these first two episodes. While this may be a turn on for some people's deepest fantasies, I like to think there is light at the end of that tunnel toward submission.
Still, except for a few typos, it is very well written and I look forward to Part 3. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
lizz
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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very well written enjoyed it completely,can't wait to see what happens to tina next, loved the story very much thank you (9/10)
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lockedup737
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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Writing skills are good. The story is written well and keeps you interested even though I despise torture as a enjoyable turn on.I read the entire story hoping for a change in the direction of the story but it didn't happen.The basic concept is great and I will hope that the story steers less toward torture but if that is your "thing" then this is a good story for you. Maybe freedom for Tina and a little revenge without the extreme torture?? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Excalibur_1949
(Edit) (Sep 2, 2008)
- Other things are planned for Tina, some good, some bad,
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| Reviewer:
wttozer
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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Very enjoyable. Looking forward to future installments. (9/10)
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Granite_II
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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Very well written. There are a few small editing corrections to be made, but the writing is high quality. Looking forward to the next chapter. Interested to see what the next stage brings. (9/10)
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womentamer
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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congratulations, very good story. In next chapters it would be great to turn Tina into a performing circus animal just to be degraded in front of former rivals or friends. I miss some more physical descriptions.
womentamer (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lizgirl
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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Very interesting ideas and very well written, but I often like your stories :) (9/10)
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irishman112145
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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This story is one of the best I have ever read. I cannot wait for more of this. Keep up the good work. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 28, 2008 |
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great start can't wait for more (10/10)
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