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The thing
Author: Sadistic_Gentleman
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(Added on Aug 27, 2008)
(This month 44789 readers) (Total 81206 readers) |
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A story about a girl who is used by a couple. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
sulkon
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May 28, 2012 |
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Rather enjoyable story but it has some shortcomings. The girl giving herself up so easily makes the plot too unbelievable, additionally the couple don't make for interesting protagonists. And as someone mentioned before, many of the tags are wrong (I don't see the announced successive parts incoming). (6/10)
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JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Good story, but the writing is too brash and the narrator too arrogant to let a few things be really enjoyable.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Oct 14, 2008 |
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Well written story. Holds your interest. The trust element, hand positioned webcam closeups, the girl's tears, her being required to talk about her feelings and the fact of the couple sharing their enjoyment of the girl are all adding to the appeal. Keep it coming. Will be interested especially to see how you handle the watersport in future chapter! (9/10)
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NateInPhilly
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Sep 2, 2008 |
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Now, I'm all for a good story with lots of kinks involved, but the following "tags" were not actually found in the story (despite being listed): modification, size (hinted at, not used), WaterSport, D/s, slavery, bondage(no actual bondage), chastity belt. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Jkgo
(Edit) (Sep 4, 2008)
- There will be more parts.. One per update for some time. There is 8 parts at the moment completed.
/Sadistic_Gentleman
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| Reviewer:
DominantHacker
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Sep 1, 2008 |
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Very well done. Draws you right in. (9/10)
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gypsiecowboy
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Sep 1, 2008 |
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all I can say, all I even WANT to say, is that I totally identified with the author/moderator of the story. I wanted to be there with you and I WAS there with you... Thank you. (10/10)
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subgirlsamantha
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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I loved this story! makes me wish I had a webcam!
thank you. (10/10)
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