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Bred in Captivity
Author: Razor7826
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(Added on Aug 23, 2008)
(This month 17410 readers) (Total 32283 readers) |
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A man is abducted for breeding against his will. However, he is not the only unwilling participant. |
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| Reviewer:
chalsia
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Sep 28, 2008 |
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very nice story, a definite must read, thank you (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2008)
- Thank you! And your first review, at that!
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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An interesting and original idea, with some good characters. I'd like to learn more about the Welder, what the frame is, more about the Sisters, and so on. She got training, why didn't he? Just assuming men know how? Well written; I'd like to see much more. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2008)
- The original concepts for the story had a more 'Amazon Women' feel to it, which kind of answers a few of your questions. "A good man is hard to find," as they say.
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| Reviewer:
wistan
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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Well written piece. The story is an original one, which is always nice. The characters seem well drawn from what we know of them so far, they are not the stereotypical sort of characters you so often get in this kind of fiction who instantly go along with any mad scheme that gets them laid!
I did find myself hoping that the man and woman will win out over their captors and escape. I guess the eugenics idea has become one so associated with evil that I instinctively want them to lose, and lose big. That kinda got in the way of my enjoying the story for what it is, but that's no fault of the writer and I can certainly see how people would enjoy this story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Aug 29, 2008)
- My BDSM stories tend not to have all-around 'happy' endings. Why? What I find so interesting about this aspect of sexuality and fetishes are the wide range of emotions for all those involved. Yes, I know how disheartening it can be to see unhappy endings for characters you like, but the emotions that they experience when everything is terrible (and stays terrible) is what makes writing these stories so interesting, and hopefully worthwhile to read.
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wistan
(Edit) (Aug 31, 2008)
- I do get that, and some of my own stuff has endings that certainly wouldn't be considered happy. I don't know what it is, maybe I was just in a contrary mood when I read this or something, but I find myself rooting for the two of them to escape, or even just go on holding out until they died.
As I said though, it's not really a criticism because it has nothing to do with the writing skill you've shown here, which is certainly good.
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ElectricBadger
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Aug 24, 2008 |
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Very interesting concept, well written and intriguing! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Aug 30, 2008)
- I'm glad you liked it.
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