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Cheryl's Shooting-day
Author: Michael.
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(Added on Aug 23, 2008)
(This month 19979 readers) (Total 44144 readers) |
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a young girl is being sexually tortured in a guy’s private sm-room. It involves bondage, spanking, a lot of needle-play, and electrocuting. |
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Aug 30, 2008 |
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Michael, there are so many grammatical and spelling errors in the story, it's really difficult to enjoy. While the surprising ending is fun, what happened to the other woman? What about her boyfriend? Too many holes in the story... not enough in the labia. (Which is already plural. "labia's" would be a possessive.) (5/10)
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