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The Taking Author: J.
(Added on Jan 8, 2002) (This month 51106 readers) (Total 62784 readers)
A young girl struts her stuff once too often in front of the wrong man.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (7/10)

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Reviewer: La Toya (Edit) Rating: Apr 29, 2005
very nice story (8/10)

Reviewer: crickette (Edit) Rating: Nov 11, 2003
Short but good. Loved the ending. (7/10)

Reviewer: Curtis (Edit) Rating: Jul 13, 2003
Another vignette, more completely formed this time, which would have brought an '8', except that the ending was quite unsatisfactory. Who cares what the realtor's records show? Someone was obviously there, anyway. It would have been stronger (and made greater use of the 'sci-fi' story code) if the police had sent in a forensics team and found nothing. The author seems to be much better at the 30-40k stories. (7/10)

Reviewer: lindalookingla (Edit) Rating: May 25, 2003
Excellent short story. Nothing graphic here (you need to read The Storyteller for that), but very nicely developed. (9/10)

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