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Patience is a Virtue
Author: Ragoczy
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(Added on Aug 17, 2008)
(This month 34571 readers) (Total 50642 readers) |
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The kidnapping, psychological breaking and eventual transformation of an unsuspecting girl. |
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| Reviewer:
Masika
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Sep 29, 2012 |
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Excellent writing. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alix
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Jan 7, 2012 |
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A really well crafted story that took me all the way. Thanks for sharing it. (10/10)
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Sojurboy
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Dec 13, 2010 |
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I gave this short story the highest marks, and if there were any higher, it would have gotten them! I found myself highly aroused, and sorely disappointed to reach "The End!" How could you stop here. I feel just like the girl. You have left me in a state with no where to go. You are definitely a genius, and did your job well. Now, finish the story, DAMN YOU!!!! Oh Well, thank you for a wonderful tease. Well done. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Oct 15, 2008 |
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Fascinating psychological story! Hope there is more! Much more! (10/10)
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toy_doll
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Aug 27, 2008 |
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I can't wait for the next installment! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
evorik
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Aug 23, 2008 |
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Excellent (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
jdsaunders01
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Aug 23, 2008 |
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First class story. A commercial quality piece of work. Realistic plotting, believable characterizations, and psychologically engaging as intended. Please continue this storyline, and start up others. :) (10/10)
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rocket71
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Aug 22, 2008 |
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Great stoty ,Sure hope there is more to come. (10/10)
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