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A Tape
Author: Razor7826
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(Added on Aug 6, 2008)
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A widower receives a videotape of her grown daughter being tortured and raped. What did the women do to deserve such a cruel fate? Only by fulfilling bizarre demands will she be able to find out. |
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| Reviewer:
snuffy28
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Jul 28, 2012 |
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Great Plot!!
Needed more sexual details, the ordeal Monica went thru,
more details in the sex acts (8/10)
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Dusty Spring
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Well written. Excellant foundation for a story. (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 4, 2009 |
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Excellent tale. Both in build-up as in characterizations. Plausible and highly erotic too.
Was waiting to review it til it was complete, but forgot.
Here's that wrong put right.
Thanks Razor.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
csr
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Aug 25, 2008 |
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I like this because it is nicely written and a fresh twist on the old abduction plot-line. I'm anticipating a great story and eagerly awaiting your further additions! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Aug 26, 2008)
- The fourth (and final!) chapter should be coming soon. It is by far the longest of the chapters, and while most of it is written, the central scene needs a lot more embellishment.
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ramses
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Aug 14, 2008 |
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Excellent, very original start. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
markle
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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Hooray! What a wicked little tale. Please post more. Can't wait to see what happens next. I really like this one. (10/10)
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Mad Lews
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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A novel twist, excellent plot and pacing. Keep it up. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 7, 2008 |
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i realy enjoyed this, i hope in future parts if you add to it that you make them longer (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Razor7826
(Edit) (Aug 7, 2008)
- Wow, thank you for reviewing it before it was even posted to the front page. Yes, there will be future parts; I just had this sitting on my hard drive for a few months, so I decided to break it into sections, edit it, and post what I had.
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