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The World On Her Knees
Author: Keri Grannis
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(Added on Aug 6, 2008)
(This month 79666 readers) (Total 110255 readers) |
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Amy is on assignment at the FBI to investigate a series of snuff films being produced by terrorists in Iran. When she arrives at the filming site, her crew is ambushed and she is taken prisoner. What follows is the beginnings of a plot to overthrow every major government by enslaving its women |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 6, 2009 |
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Can't see anything wrong with this story. Okay, so some reviews were made after only one chapter and now there's four.
But even the first chapter is very well written, in a style that grabs your attention and keeps it.
Chapter two and three have a feel to them as if they weren't part of the same story at first, because they doen't seem to fit very well.
Part four is again very well written, tho, and the whole tale has me wondering and hoping Keri will still add more. Please?
JJ (9/10)
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kemosabe
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Aug 27, 2008 |
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Far too short to be of any value at this point, although the writing indicates the author has talent. There is nothing in this one that would encourage anyone to look further.
Three more chapters(?) and the author obviously doesn't read her reviews. I'm lowering my rating (4/10)
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grinner666
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Aug 14, 2008 |
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Same thing from me; the author can obviously string a compelling sentence together, but there aren't ENOUGH sentences to make a story, or even a chapter. More like a scene. A SHORT scene. String six or eight of these together in one chapter and I'll adjust my score, but thus far it doesn't go nearly far enough to be called a story.
Also, one practical matter: FBI does NOT investigate foreign crimes. Interpol does, occasionally CIA does. But FBI's responsibilities end at the border of US territories (with a few exceptions, like tracking drug money in South America) unless it's known that a US citizen is committing the crimes, in which case FBI will have jurisdiction in SOME, not all, cases. (5/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 10, 2008 |
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thestory is god so far, but more is need to make it morereadable and rating wise, i willadjust my rating when you post more (5/10)
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