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The Payment
Author: zone
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(Added on Jan 4, 2002)
(This month 18334 readers) (Total 29872 readers) |
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Wife pays for husbands sins and then some more actions after the payment fullfilled. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 26, 2005 |
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the story was ok was hoping for more (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jan 28, 2005 |
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The story was pretty good. The first two chapters seemed to fit okay together while chapter three felt rushed and just added at the last minute.The theme was not constant throughout the story. The three chapters could easily be developed into two different good stories. (6/10)
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