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Tortured French Journalist
Author: Shabbadew2002
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(Added on Jul 8, 2008)
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A beautiful French reporter, investigating corruption in the Philippines, is ensnared by a rich woman politician and turned into her slave. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 6, 2009 |
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The start of the story feels a tad rushed, eager to get to the thick of the action. However, the rushed feel isn't a problem any longer when we do get to Fabienne's predicaments.
Nasty and inventive, well described tortures, make this a great read. Although Fabienne's reactions aren't always in sync with the situation she's in. It sometimes seems like her state of mind doesn't change at all, between the initial interview with Mrs. Blanca, during her tortures and being led into the clutches of the former.
On a completely different note: I've worked as a Fire Guard at the Antwerp plant of BASF. During the courses, at the Antwerp 'House Of Safety', they showed us a neat little feat, involving steel- and copperwool, used to clean pots and pans in a kitchen.
When you bring both poles of a simple AAA battery into contact with said wools, the current makes it to glow and burn-up. And that's only a couple of milli-ampères with 1.5 volts.
Imagine what happens when when you stuff a wad of that wool inside a woman's vagina and apply a stronger current to it...
Nevertheless, a well written, inventive little tale that gets better along the way.
JJ (9/10)
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- Replied by:
searchndest2002
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2009)
- You are the most insightful of reviewers. I think your criticism of Fabienne's state of mind is not off the mark. I may do a rewrite to address it. As far as the use of steel wool, you are right....current applied to a brillo pad will set it on fire. But my online correspondence with two individuals, who claim to have experience, says that the use of a pad made from larger copper rings does not produce the same reaction. Wet with a water based gel, the pad acts like a solid metal device. And greater pain is produced at the small tip of the picana. The larger electrode provides the "base" ....producing a diffused pain compared to pain produced at the picana's tip. I find it a delicious application of electro torture -don't you? Thank you again for taking the time to review my stories.
Shab
- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 7, 2009)
- You are of course right about copper. Since it has far higher heat-diffusion capabilities than iron or steel, instead of burning, the heat spreads over larger areas making the copper glow over larger parts. Add to that the wetness (natural or jellied) and the 'picana-up-the-twat' seems the more plausible, especially, like you pointed-out, it wasn't wool but a larger ringed sponge-like 'device'...
JJ
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Jul 31, 2008 |
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A wonderful piece that goes from being an interrogation/secret police set up, to a master/slave story. Everything written by Shabbadew2002 is well worth reading, and this is especially good if you like F/f torture/humiliation stories. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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i realy enjoyed this story, way to go (10/10)
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