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Strip Searching Rebecca
Author: Powerone
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(Added on Jan 1, 2002)
(This month 155420 readers) (Total 257465 readers) |
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Rebecca is caught by the authorities attempting to smuggle drugs. She is forced to strip naked, bound and forced to perform sexual perversions at the hands of her captors. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 17, 2012 |
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Set up of the smuggling is rather ridiculous alright. As is most of the dialogue.
As a consequence, I couldn't really enjoy the story either.
A good idea written to shreds because of no thorough background.
JJ (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 12, 2003 |
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Good story, but to predicatable by todays headlines, you always hear about women being strip searched over deas for possible drub possesion
(8/10)
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T-Luv
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Mar 24, 2003 |
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I liked the concept, and I liked the series of rapes and "punishments". I agree with Terry that the dialogue didn't seem very natural. Statements that essentially came down to 'Okay, next, we're going to humiliate you. Are you ready to be humiliated?' It's like warning somebody that you're going to insult them in a moment.
One plot element that I had trouble with: what was Rebecca supposed to do with the drugs? Her brother says (paraphrasing) 'here, hide this in your luggage and take it to Brazil'. And do what with it? Carry it around? And hiding it without Rebecca's knowledge - again, what does that accomplish? Are the parents supposed to take it from her? Is she supposed to give it to somebody? Is somebody going to identify her and take it from her luggage when she's not looking? I didn't see the purpose of the smuggling. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachmellon
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Mar 24, 2003 |
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very well intense story. i like the Punishment glove thing..LOL.. but i am enjoying it and wondering what will be next with her and her brother. please continue to write. looking forward for more writings.. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Aug 1, 2002 |
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Good story, nice premise, enjoyed the way it works into the next stage of the "interrogation and search" building upon Rebecca's humiliation and debasement. Wanted actually to rate it an 8.5 but feel it warrants higher than an 8, I do like your style Powerone. As for drayman and the rating of pedophiles, over 13 takes it out of the pedo category, so you really should have read it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Terry Gabriola
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Aug 1, 2002 |
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Provides the visual imagery but little else. No characterization of the people involved, insight into thought processes, etc. Grammar and spelling throw a few wobblers which stop it from reading naturally. And the dialogue sucks: stilted and unnatural. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
watcher69
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Mar 27, 2002 |
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I also agree with hyphen666 and Guillaume777. I also gave it a 10 to counteract the negative rating. You are entitled to your own opinion but at least read the story and rate it on its merits. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
cps1
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Feb 13, 2002 |
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great story. I loved the oral and anal sex in it. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
helenaj
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Jan 26, 2002 |
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I adored this totally tho it seemed a bit strange in places. I wish it had been longer tho.If it had Id have said 9 cos nothings perfect. Honestly, Its really good. (8/10)
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Guillaume777
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Jan 2, 2002 |
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I completly agree with hyphen666 and I gave this story a 10, not because it deserve it but to cancel drayman rating. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
drayman
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Jan 1, 2002 |
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I began to download this story when I noticed the word 'pedo' in the description. I stopped as I do not wish to read any contribution involving children. The story description only mentioned 'teen' on the New Story Listing. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
hyphen666
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2002)
- You are entitled to your opinion. However since you did not read the story, how can you rate it? You have become a censor not a critic. SHAME ON YOU!
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