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African Nightmare
Author: Brian Jones
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(Added on Jun 28, 2008)
(This month 59775 readers) (Total 71231 readers) |
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Four male tourists arrested in war torn Nigeria. They are mistaken for mercenaries. One of the party is interrogated tortured and raped by his captors. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
lil_threat
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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Wow, good job! I really liked this story! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
nm.jayhawk
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Jul 5, 2008 |
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Excellent command of the language, good plot device(s). Hope to see more from this author soon. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
wadworth6x
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Jul 4, 2008 |
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Well structured, good grammar and spelling, the content I found personally quite appealing. The only criticism, and I'm being picky - is that I thought the ending was a little rushed but that said a very enjoyable read. Many thanks (9/10)
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- Replied by:
briboy2008
(Edit) (Jul 6, 2008)
- Many thanks for your kind review. Yes I did rush the ending as I wanted to get this story up on the site. However, having done that these sort of endings always leave room for a sequel.
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