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ZANU PF
Author: A.Broadsword
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(Added on Jun 24, 2008)
(This month 21928 readers) (Total 41507 readers) |
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Susan becomes literally a white imperialist pig. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Nov 21, 2014 |
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Sure, there's typos, but nothing that detracts from enjoying the read.
One error: heating oil and diesel are one and the same product, except that, to make diesel, a colour additive is added for anti-fraud reasons since heating oil is way cheaper than diesel.
Interesting story, sadly unfinished...
JJ (8/10)
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chksng19
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Jun 26, 2008 |
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interesting idea, but waaaaay too many typos. It would indeed, I agree with Benfan, be nice to hear more of her internal thoughts and feelings. (7/10)
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Benfan
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Jun 26, 2008 |
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I love the premise, and the writer does a good job with vivid descriptions and believable setting. The last part seems rushed a bit, and there could be more exploration of the main character's thoughts. I look forward to the next chapter and am ready to upgrade this rating. (7/10)
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