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What happened to Mary?
Author: Lockedup737
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(Added on Jun 9, 2008)
(This month 124872 readers) (Total 174285 readers) |
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This a story about what happened to a character I wrote about in "My daughter becomes my Mistress". It starts after the story "Cindy's lessons". Cindy used Mary and tries to make up for it but Mary wants revenge. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 11, 2010 |
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Story sometimes feels like it was a bit of a struggle to come to terms with it. Ups and downs a plenty, both in the storyline and in the conversations.
Overall a nice read, but still a story which failed to move me.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 8, 2008 |
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nice job (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
irishman112145
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Sep 8, 2008 |
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all of your stories have left me wanting more. There is just enough to make you enjoy it but always wanting more. I am sorry to see this end but I cannot wait until you submit other writtings. (10/10)
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