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Interns new job
Author: Joseph
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(Added on Jun 8, 2008)
(This month 13534 readers) (Total 27834 readers) |
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After getting caught looking at porn at work Fred's boss gives him a new position. |
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| Reviewer:
subOHman
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Jun 20, 2010 |
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Very good story over all. Makes some quick jumps to get to what the author seems to like. (7/10)
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abitbent
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Jun 22, 2008 |
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The premise is creative as is the interaction between the two main characters. The grammatical and spelling mistakes often make it hard to read. With some proofreading and creative adjectives, this would polish up nicely. (5/10)
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