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Mary's Last Journey
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on Jun 1, 2008)
(This month 14542 readers) (Total 28431 readers) |
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the awful fate of a girl driven to extremes |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Dominica Potestas
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Jun 8, 2008 |
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Good writing - you can write a story, no doubt - but this is in noway erotic at all, so therefore will not rate high on a BDSM site. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
sheilagirl
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Jun 7, 2008 |
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This is one of my favorite subjects. I have to agree with the other reviews before me that it lacked erotic content. Your writing style is good, and I know I've seen other stories by you. I've been working on a couple of hanging stories of my own for awhile and invite you and anyone else to critique it when I finally post it. I get hot just writing it because it's me being hanged. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 4, 2008 |
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Nicely written, but not very sexy. There are lots of opportunities to turn this one into a hot story, but you've missed the target. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Jun 4, 2008 |
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Very good writing style. But where is the erotic component? Where is the bdsm? The prisoner could at least have been naked on the platform and subject to some form of sexual humiliation before the watching crowd! (7/10)
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