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Jack's Night Out
Author: Excalibur
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(Added on May 27, 2008)
(This month 51022 readers) (Total 61324 readers) |
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Jack met Justine in the bar and bought her a drink...the biggest mistake of his life. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (5.5/10) |
Average
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Reviewer:
BBWdehumanizingyou
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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The beginning seems well written and creative, however the plot seems redundant and not very original. I look forward to see a second chapter and where you may go with the story. (6/10)
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