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My Inheritance
Author: E.Z. Riter
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(Added on Aug 3, 2000)
(This month 283118 readers) (Total 329346 readers) |
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A little of everything. No SM or any hard stuff, though. This is a story of a young college graduate who inherits 3,000 sex slaves, $20,000,000 and a treasure hunt. Two of the slaves are Andy and Mary, very special women indeed. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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Altough this is very well written, I have dual feelings about this story, as I found it a tad far-fetched at times.
JJ (8/10)
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gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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'Not very engaging' is right on. Adombows has it right here. I give it a rating of 4, too. Here is one typical comical portion of this nonsense...
<<"I love you, Davy," she whispered in my ear.
"How is your pussy?"
"Sore and swollen. You really pounded me, sweetheart. Why did you do it?"
"You need a good, hard fucking to remind you that you are a kitten. You are
made to be fucked and fucked hard and often."
"I know. I never forget I belong to you. I am very happy belonging to you,
Davy, but, well, have I done something to anger you?"
"Sit back and be quiet, kitten.">>
OK, Poodle. Thank god kitten's pussy is ok. Yawn.
(4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Jun 5, 2003 |
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This is a great story. It wonderfully combines sex, which is described fantastically, with a good plot. The only wish I would have, is to ditch the chapter titles, and make it one continuous story, and that little thing at the end of each chapter (Please, give me your comments) and change the beginning of each new chapter so that it didn't always assume that the person was starting with that chapter, and had read nothing before. However, this is the best story ever. I agree, I SOOOOO want to be Davy. However, I'd want to be him at the beginning of the summer of his 14th year. I would definitely venture to say that this is the best story I have ever read. Enjoy this story. Reccomendable to everyone. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Jun 5, 2003)
- I can but say that this is THE most fantastic story ever. I just wanted to reiterate how much fun this was to read. This kept me up all night multiple time during rereadings.
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| Reviewer:
JayCeeEll
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Apr 26, 2003 |
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This story is in the top 10 MC's on the internet.
Read it NOW! (10/10)
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adombows
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Jul 14, 2002 |
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Not vey engaging (4/10)
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Nitrofox
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2002)
- What do you mean "Not very engaging?" I suppose it all depends on how you define engaging, but this is how I define engaging. Engaging means that there is character development (ie: the characters change over time) and that certainly happened, Davy with his Devil Dog Diablo, etc. The plot developed as well: What started out as Davy and two women became Davy and four women, and there was the whole thing about the formula. Engaging also means to me that there are fun parts. Sure it is a bit repetitive, but there were often new ideas, and new circumstances. I don't know how you define engaging, but in my book, this story definitely fulfills the criteria.
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| Reviewer:
Stefanie
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Apr 27, 2002 |
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This is a great story, well written and well thought. I would recommend it to anyone, it is very educational in deed. (10/10)
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arddruid
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Apr 2, 2002 |
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While I won't say that this story is my "Favorite" story, I will say it is one of my favorites. Well conceived, well written and thoroughly enjoyable, it is definitely one of the "Best on the 'Net" (10/10)
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bommer
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Aug 19, 2001 |
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this is such a great story. i so want to be Davy
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- Replied by:
Nitrofox
(Edit) (Jun 9, 2003)
- Agreed ... Seconded ... Indeed.
-Nitro
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| Reviewer:
taskmaster
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Jun 30, 2001 |
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The development of the charaters waas full and well rounded.Would love to read more about Davy having Mistress's Diana and Delilah visit for a turn as Davy's kittens. I relly enjoyed the ending in Ch 52. Hoping for sequel. (10/10)
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Madame
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Apr 19, 2001 |
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I really enjoyed the story and will definitely read more by the same writer. I would suggest though that some proofreading be done seeing as there were a couple of errors that I had to decypher. Otherwise though, it really was a stimulating read. :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bytebiter99
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Apr 11, 2001 |
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One of the best Mind Control stories ever written. Shows real character grouth by the main character. I wish I had some of his chemical. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MJ Schur |
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Mar 14, 2001 |
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My favorite all time story! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
TayKaim |
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Aug 3, 2000 |
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an excellent read, possibly the best story I have ever read of this type. (10/10)
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