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Hard Labor Author: velvetglove
(Added on May 26, 2008) (This month 136527 readers) (Total 182520 readers)
Set in 2013, a young married couple are sentenced to a life of Hard Labor, in a world where they have no rights. The list of story codes is not complete (I don’t want to reveal all in advance) but the following will NOT feature: young, teen, extreme torture, snuff. Hard Labor will be posted from May to September 2008.

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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
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Reviewer: schoolboylv (Edit) Rating: Jul 26, 2008
Sometimes you go a little fast without fully explaining each scene. Also, you seem to jump around quite a bit and that makes it a little difficult to follow. Other than that this is an excellent idea. Keep up the good work! (8/10)

Reviewer: Lovecraft (Edit) Rating: Jul 6, 2008
Great story! Much slower moving than what I usually prefer, but the premise is intriguing and the promise of many things yet to come is always there grabbing at you. (9/10)

Reviewer: JonMaddux (Edit) Rating: Jun 29, 2008
finished chpt 8, was looking forward to a nice detailed version of how ferns ass was delivered up. Its an awesome story even if i missed that. (10/10)
Replied by: velvetglove (Edit) (Jul 2, 2008)
Hi Jon, Thanks for the review. The delivery will be there, videoed, for Derek to enjoy soon.

Reviewer: Falcon (Edit) Rating: Jun 25, 2008
5/27/08: Intriguing premise for story. Looking forward to more chapters. May adjust rating when there is more to go on.
6/12/08: Just finished chapters 2-5 and find that author is really delivering a story as good as the first chapter! This is one of the most exquisite tales of forced sexual slavery I have read. And the scat scenes do help the story work! Am increasing my rating from 7 to 9!
6/25/08: Just read chapters 6-7. More neat stuff! Derek's experience as waiter most novel. Keep it coming! (9/10)
Replied by: velvetglove (Edit) (Jun 13, 2008)
Thanks, Falcon, for your comments and re-rating. I know that scat is not to everybody's taste (for example 'littleone' below), but I do not use it gratuitously, rather as a weapon to portray character (Steele) and situation (extreme, unlimited). Chapters 6 & 7 are in the pipeline. Regards, Velvetglove

Reviewer: FootSlaveE (Edit) Rating: Jun 25, 2008
Very strong start. I am really looking forward to reading future chapters!
6/25: WOW! Just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for future chapters. You are truly the master of this genre. (10/10)

Reviewer: kemosabe (Edit) Rating: Jun 22, 2008
Looking forward to more. Held my attention like few in this site. (9/10)

Reviewer: Rocky (Edit) Rating: Jun 10, 2008
Another gem by one of my favorite authors. Please keep the chapters coming! (9/10)
Replied by: velvetglove (Edit) (Jun 13, 2008)
Thanks Rocky. I'm using shorter chapters than before (for example, After the Pestilence) and will try to keep them cumming regularly, if you know what I mean. Regards, Velvetglove

Reviewer: littleone_ (Edit) Rating: Jun 6, 2008
The story had promise but at the end of the day it is basically about; scat that was where velvetglove centered the first part of the story and for my taste way over did it. (6/10)
Replied by: GuiltyKarma (Edit) (Jun 6, 2008)
Littleone, it says in the description that there is scat. If you don't enjoy scat then don't read the story. Don't write a negative review because you don't enjoy the content in the story when it says it's in there at the begining!

Reviewer: GuiltyKarma (Edit) Rating: Jun 3, 2008
yes! Yet another excellent VelvetGlove story! Shows all the promise of Five Words and After the Pestilence. I can't wait to read much more! Kudos to the author of these wonderful stories! (10/10)
Replied by: velvetglove (Edit) (Jun 4, 2008)
Hi Guilty and everybody else who has reviewed Hard labor. If you would like to know how to get a sneak preview of chapters earlier than they are posted on this site, please get in touch.

Reviewer: gnuman (Edit) Rating: Jun 2, 2008
The second two chapters really put the first chapter into proper context. The story should get better as velvetglove brings us to the birthday party and later. (9/10)

Reviewer: Cutemary1978 (Edit) Rating: May 31, 2008
I love Velvetgloves stories! This story has a lot of promise and I truly appreciate how well he weaves the plot and develops the characters. Personally I love stories where the husband and wife are put in a situation through their own nieve nature or arrogance and they are embarrassed, made to look silly, humiliated and broken down. After the Pestilence was great! (9/10)

Reviewer: DungeonMaster6 (Edit) Rating: May 30, 2008
This story has promise, and I agree with the others: my rating could go higher with subsequent chapters. (7/10)

Reviewer: suetc (Edit) Rating: May 30, 2008
Great introduction, good to have something different for change (8/10)

Reviewer: Dominica Potestas (Edit) Rating: May 30, 2008
Very exciting set up. Will come back. (8/10)

Reviewer: grinner666 (Edit) Rating: May 30, 2008
Nice start. I WILL adjust my rating as the story continues, but though I enjoyed it, the first chapter was too short to merit a better review. (7/10)

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