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All About Eve
Author: JK
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(Added on Apr 15, 2008)
(This month 200209 readers) (Total 268444 readers) |
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Eve is a pretty house wife, who is a sex slave to her husband. He turns her over to her teen age sons, and is now a sex slave to all three men in her family. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Done many times before, and will prolly be done many times more, but the story is again an example of the fact that no matter how many times something has been done already, when it is well written, it doesn't matter.
JJ (9/10)
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Sir James
(Edit) (Jan 25, 2009)
- Thank you for the compliment. For the time being I will let "Eve" rest, but may come back to her in the future. Right now I am working on additons to "Jake & Mari"
JK
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| Reviewer:
SirPat45
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Oct 17, 2008 |
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I certainly hope this is not the end of the story. PLEASE continue the chapters with eve and TJ as her new Master. I have enjoyed this stroy immensely and would suggest reading it to anyone. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Oct 17, 2008)
- Thank you for your remarks. There might be future chapters about "Eve". After a while my characters seem to take on a reality. I like Eve. Right now, however, I am trying to post new Chapters about "Jake & Mari", another of my favorite characters. Again, thanks for the encouragement.
JK
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| Reviewer:
Dr_BuzzCzar
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Aug 24, 2008 |
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Well written, good pace, nice flow to the story and action. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Aug 24, 2008)
- Thank your for the good words. I enjoy writing these stories. Most are based on real life situations. I have a couple more in the works.
JK
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| Reviewer:
Charles E. Campbell
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Apr 21, 2008 |
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I really am enjoying your story. Please write more, but have Eve speak. Let her explain her feelings, motivation, etc. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Apr 22, 2008)
- Thanks for your positive review. I have submitted six more chapters, and hopefully they will be posted, soon. I am contemplating more chapters in which Eve tells her side of the story. JK
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Sir James
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2008)
- The new chapters have been posted. Hope you enjoy. JK
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 20, 2008 |
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A very good story, highly recommendable. If I were to offer any suggestions it would be to up the dialog a bit. Let your characters show and tell us what is going on rather than having a third person narrator do most of the heavy lifting. Still in all one of the better written stories we've seen in a while keep up the good work. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Apr 22, 2008)
- Thanks for your positive review. I have submitted six more chapters. I assume they will be posted very soon. I am contemplating more chapters in which Eve tells her side of the story. JK
- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2008)
- The new chapters have been posted. I hope you enjoy them. JK
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Apr 18, 2008 |
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Excellent story. Good timing and premise.
I would recommend you proofread it a little more though. There are some grammar errors that detract (slightly) from the enjoyment.
I hope there is more soon. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Sir James
(Edit) (Apr 23, 2008)
- The new chapters have been posted. I hope you enjoy them. JK
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