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Your Will
Author: jaowriter
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(Added on Apr 13, 2008)
(This month 13663 readers) (Total 23030 readers) |
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Picking up girls at a club can be a dangerous activity. Not picking them up may be even worse. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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great job (10/10)
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CoughDrop
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Apr 19, 2008 |
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Marvellous! (10/10)
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FelesMala
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Apr 18, 2008 |
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Well-written and very hot. Please write more. (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Apr 13, 2008 |
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I barely think I'm worthy to review this story, which is easily one of the best written stories I've read on the net. What I thought was a gimmick at first - the introduction where the story switches between first and second person narrative - makes total sense by the end of the story, and all of the other tricks and devices work well, almost despite themselves. The mind of a psychopath is laid bare, poetically but not distranctingly.
I think this story will be adored by loving couples who go in for edge play, or at least fantasise about pushing the boundaries well beyond what is acceptable or possible.
One of the stories I expect to revisit quite often. Please, write more, jaowriter! (10/10)
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