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The Institute
Author: suzysmiles
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(Added on Apr 9, 2008)
(This month 18640 readers) (Total 33441 readers) |
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Set in a futuristic society, this is the story of a young girl whose family send her to The Institute where she reluctantly learns how to sexually please men in a series of painful lessons. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
sillypony
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Oct 24, 2008 |
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I would like to see some more depth as well- a lot of the interesting content would be her personal feelings, and those of the other girls. But I really like the premise, and think your writing is most definitely promising. I would love to see the next chapter. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Falcon
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Apr 29, 2008 |
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Liked the opening scene where father explains about the 'finishing school'. What would help the story is for the author to let us feel that we are really seeing and feeling things thru the girl's eyes - getting in touch with her humiliation. Instead we mostly get a mechanical blow by blow description of sex acts. (5/10)
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