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Cassie's Exam
Author: Cassie
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(Added on Mar 30, 2008)
(This month 70383 readers) (Total 94632 readers) |
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Cassie is bought as a slave at auction by a doctor and his brother. A medical fetish story |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
jazmine232
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May 25, 2008 |
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I also liked this story, and I am waiting to read more (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Apr 12, 2008 |
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A good solid story line. I'll read more. Now to the nit picking. three or four 70+ word sentences make your reader gasp for breath (I think the longest was 89 words) and you seem to have some kind of auto correct function turned on in your word processor, word substitutions like (retrained for restrained) (said for side)(your for you're or you are)(stating for starting) etc. All minor stuff but a read through with fresh eyes will catch most of those and turn a 7 into a 9 (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Cassie
(Edit) (Apr 18, 2008)
- i have to apologise for my awful spelling and grammer but im dyslexic so writing isnt my strong point, i rely heavily on the spell check but i thought i'd just give it a go and try and write someting people could enjoy, i have loads of ideas but writing them is a big challage.
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| Reviewer:
Noelle
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Apr 7, 2008 |
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I really liked this story and can't wait to read more, there were a few typos but not enough to disrtact from the story (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Apr 5, 2008 |
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I found a few typos, but the main problem is how short your chapters are! This story has great potential and I am eager to read more. (7/10)
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Venom
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Apr 1, 2008 |
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Not bad. Some mistakes like "virginally" instead of "vaginally"; pick them out if you have the time. I think I would like to read more from you. (7/10)
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