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First Lessons
Author: Lady Erotica
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(Added on Mar 23, 2008)
(This month 19426 readers) (Total 48629 readers) |
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This is a Story of a youngs teen brutal introduction to sex and submission. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Jun 1, 2008 |
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I like it so far. It does hold a lot of promise. I may upgrade my rating if it stays interesting and gets hard enough. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
himind
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Mar 30, 2008 |
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Holds a lot of promise.She's ended the first at a tantalizing point.Waiting for the next instalment. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
fellatrix
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Mar 27, 2008 |
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Good as far as it goes, but it needs revising, and seems to be all set-up for future installments. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
LadyE
(Edit) (Mar 30, 2008)
- I have submitted a revised copy but I'm still waiting for it to be replaced
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Mar 26, 2008 |
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This is a good story and would rate higher, if not for a terrible job of proofreading that has mother standing on top of mother as mother tells mother to leave. Clean that up and I will regrade. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
LadyE
(Edit) (Mar 26, 2008)
- Thank you for taking the time and reading my story as well as posting a review. It is truly appreciated. I must say it isn't a terrible job of proofreading but in fact a terrible idea not to proofread it before sending it in. I appologize and have corrected those mistakes I did find and sent in a revised version, hopefully it will be up soon.
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