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Among The Missing
Author: Rubberwolf
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(Added on Feb 28, 2008)
(This month 113800 readers) (Total 149521 readers) |
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This is the first chapter of a private eye thiller (Well, perhaps thiller is the wrong word, but the opening scene will wet your taste buds. :) |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Mist
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Apr 11, 2008 |
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This is a fine story I have read so far, and I agree with ramses many story have a promising start but gets too unbelievable as the story develops. Great narrative qualities too! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2008)
- Thanks for the feedback. Will try not to disapoint in latter chapters.
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| Reviewer:
lilslut4u
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Apr 6, 2008 |
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this is one of the best stories i have read in a long long time possibly ever. when will you be finishing it??? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Apr 7, 2008)
- Wow, thanks for the feedback. As for when, you will just have to wait and see. To paraphrase one of my favourate stage shows: I want to
" see you quiver with antici.....
.....Pation."
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| Reviewer:
ramses
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Mar 24, 2008 |
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This is one of the best written stories I have found on this site until now. I really enjoyed reading it. The main reason I'm giving it a 10 immediately is that I want to see how it develops. Too many stories have a promising start but get too unbelievable when the story develops.Don't let her enjoy it too much either.
You do have rare narrative qualities. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2008)
- Wow. That's a lot to live upto. I only hope that I don't disapoint. Anyway, glad you enjoyed it.
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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Mar 23, 2008 |
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A fine story so far, variedly narrated (what is particularly importent when dealing with the same motives again and again). I especially like the dressing sequences. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Rubberwolf
(Edit) (Mar 28, 2008)
- Thanks Venom. There are a few more dressing sequences to come. Glad to see that I have moved from 7 to 8. P.S. Love the car by the way.
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