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The Johnsons
Author: James P
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(Added on Feb 20, 2008)
(This month 35661 readers) (Total 58828 readers) |
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Pete and Scott (father and son) go to live with Donna and Becky (girlfriend and daughter). The men are fat, lazy and out of shape until the women expose and humiliate their asses. |
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| Reviewer:
sissyslutstu
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Feb 24, 2008 |
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This is well written and hot. The humiliation is fantasy but character detail makes it come alive. The interactions between the lovely Becky and the fat Scott are very hot. The scene where she convinces him to submit was very erotic. Can't wait to read more. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Feb 24, 2008)
- Thanks very much for the good review.
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Feb 22, 2008 |
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advertise your work somewhere else, this is a free site (1/10)
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- Replied by:
James P
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2008)
- Hey Dude, you are way off base here. I have given the readers of this site over 50,000 words of trashy femdom fiction. What have you given them? You don't think a writer has a right to try and earn a living? Nobody is forcing you to buy. Please don't spam my stories with unfair reviews again. Best Regards, JP
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